In this sentence the captain is telling the King Duncan about what happened in the war when Macbeth I stabbed Macdonwald from The start of his navel till his jaw making him get kill him when he was killing almost all its army along with Lady Luke that every time they killed a number of people she smiled to him with a smile as his “bitch” positions that there is going to castle in which.
But at any time he says that what happens with Lady Luke never says if I kill her so she escaped when she shaw that Macdonwald was been killed.
September 22, 2016 at 5:40 pm
Hi Luis,
I think you’ve got the right idea here, except that I’m finding some of the word-order you’re selecting is making it hard for me to understand your grammar.
Could you have a go at re-writing this, using very short simple sentences? Then we can talk about how to write more complex sentences.
Righto!
CW