Month: April 2016

It’s me Luis

I wake up in the morning of …. Which day is today? I can’t remember So  I went down stair and went my family saw me they shout dad went to take a knife and shout at me who are you I was totally confused and I said is me dad luis your son.

He said my son disapear 3 years ago same people says he get kidnapped others that he is dead some were out there we don’t know what happend and you came here and said that is you are son you know what get out of here before I cross you hundred times for steal in house now go go go now.

He could’t recognise me so I run. Out the house I didn’t

Parse

Why the  writer did it that way?  The landlady: Billy is a boy of seventeen years old, he went to bath(Somerset) looking for a job. He went to (The Bell and Dragon) he went there for the reason that he need somewhere to take a rest for a while, wend he arrives there all the mysterious things start to happen with the Landlady: is a women she was had small,white,quickly,moving hands and red finger-nails. She seemed terribly nice but in his face you can see something wasn’t right in the guest book where only two names of two boys  that billy thing he here before somewhere but he couldn’t remembered about there names are (Christopher Mulholland) and (Gregory W. Temple) he was thinking that there were for more than 3 years ago.

! MYSTERY IN THE AIR !

I have take 3 quotes about what the author’style is

1: When the landlady says to billy that the other 2 boys are still in the hotel. “But my dear boy, he never left. He’s still here”.

2: When the landlady smiles back at billy, and then she puts out one of her white hands and patted him comfortingly on the knee’How old are you my dear’

3:Seventeen Oh it’s a perfect age Mr mulholland was also seventeen.

I think that three of them shows that he wants the readers to discover what is behind each sentences. “the author gives you hints to follow them by themselves and find what’s the mystery.”

Word Classes.

Noun = person/ or object the one is talking about. ” Mr Mulholland,him, boy”

Verb = Actions. ” left, is, was, also, smile, back”

Pronoun = substitute the nouns. ” my, he, she, her, him, the, you”

Adjective =how it’s something or describing anything. ” white and old”

Adverb = Refer to actions and describe them.  ” here, comfortingly ”